2.) Reflection:
The only constructive criticism I received from the last pitch was simply to emphasize my final slogan and really sell it. The other comments about my last pitch were very positive. People thought it was good that I switched to record with my computer instead of my phone because they could hear me better, they thought I had more energy and emotion, and that they believed in my product and how I sold it.
3.) What I changed based off my feedback:
I made sure to make my final selling point, my sort of slogan, really stand out. I made sure to smile and put emphasis on my final words because that is what the viewer is left with remembering the most. I also think I performed better because I did have it almost completely memorized and was used to selling it on camera, so it felt more natural to me. I made sure to keep my energy up and stay engaged in order to keep my viewers interested in what I was saying. I definitely think this was my best pitch of the three.
Hey Madi!
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your elevator pitch! I think you really can see a large improvement from the first pitch to the last one. You had a lot of energy and I could tell you really care about your environment and want to make sure to reduce the waste we are creating. It was easy to hear you and your "slogan" had a good level of emphasis!
Great pitch although i wouldve loved to see a more cohesive memorized pitch i was still very impressed with what I saw and the idea presented . With that being said ,keep up the great work and I could totally see your company rising into something great and scalable.
ReplyDeleteHey Madi!
ReplyDeleteViewing your previous Elevator Pitches I can really see how you have improved your video quality and speech quality. You showed more energy and more focus in this last Elevator Pitch than all of the other ones combined. You also clearly gave us your topic and slogan, along with the information to support your product. Keep it up and I hope to see your product out there in the real world one day!
-Cole