1.) Pitch
Elevator Pitch No. 2
2.) The feedback I received last time was mainly people telling me how I needed to better my sound quality because it was hard to hear, and that I didn't seem excited enough about my product. Nothing about the feedback surprised me too much, I realized this is all points that I needed to work on for my next pitch. The most useful feedback was the person who said I didn't sound very excited about my product, it made me realize to focus more on how I'm saying things not only what I'm saying.
3.) I recorded my video with my computer instead of my phone, I think this made it a lot easier to hear me in the video. I also tried to seem more enthusiastic about my product and talk with more passion and less robotic.
Hey Madi!
ReplyDeleteGreat elevator pitch! It was so much easier to hear you this time then the last time so good idea switching to your computer instead of your laptop. I think with this one you seemed much more excited than you did in your first one and I could tell you cared about what you were talking about. My only piece of advice would be at the very end with the slogan. Really sell it put some more energy in that spot and I think your pitch will be even better! Great work!
I really liked you elevator pitch this time. I think you were able to sell the product successfully and you did sound more excited about what you were presenting. It shows that you took the constructive criticism and you made some great changes. Overall a great elevator pitch, your tone of voice was great the lighting was good and the pitch itself was well made.
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch round two was very good! I was effectively sold on your product and like the emotion and inflection you put into the pitch. I think you did a great job building on the areas of recommendation from the last time and the audio was better this time and much more enthusiasm into the pitch. Great job and much improved.
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