You have a really great argument in your video. However, the sound quality was really strange and you sounded like something was blocking the speaker. You had really nice lighting and I could see you clearly but you did not seem all that excited about your product. The pitch itself was good and could be very convincing I think if you work on these few little things your pitch will become amazing!
I liked your elevator pitch and I thought you made some really good points to support the opportunity you were presenting. It was a little hard for me to hear you, it sounded like the volume was on a really low setting. However, I liked how you presented yourself you looked professional and the overall quality of the video was really good!
I liked your pitch and think that this idea is something a lot of consumers would consider. I like that the straws would be a one time use like normal straws, but are biodegradable. Personally, I probably wouldn't carry around a straw I had to rewash every time I use it. But, if I had to choose between a plastic straw and a biodegradable one I'd pick the latter.
Hey Madi, You have a great argument in your pitch. This is sure to be an idea that would take off in today's political landscape as it is a monumental step for being environmentally conscious. I agree with the others that have commented that there is something going on with the sound making it a bit hard to hear, but overall great pitch!
I really like the facts and statistics you brought forward in your argument against straws. facts like these greatly help the credibility in your argument and hit home especially to us Florida natives about trash on the beaches. An economic friendly and environmentally friendly compromise has great promise. Overall great job.
Hey Madi!
ReplyDeleteYou have a really great argument in your video. However, the sound quality was really strange and you sounded like something was blocking the speaker. You had really nice lighting and I could see you clearly but you did not seem all that excited about your product. The pitch itself was good and could be very convincing I think if you work on these few little things your pitch will become amazing!
I liked your elevator pitch and I thought you made some really good points to support the opportunity you were presenting. It was a little hard for me to hear you, it sounded like the volume was on a really low setting. However, I liked how you presented yourself you looked professional and the overall quality of the video was really good!
ReplyDeleteI liked your pitch and think that this idea is something a lot of consumers would consider. I like that the straws would be a one time use like normal straws, but are biodegradable. Personally, I probably wouldn't carry around a straw I had to rewash every time I use it. But, if I had to choose between a plastic straw and a biodegradable one I'd pick the latter.
ReplyDeleteHey Madi,
ReplyDeleteYou have a great argument in your pitch. This is sure to be an idea that would take off in today's political landscape as it is a monumental step for being environmentally conscious. I agree with the others that have commented that there is something going on with the sound making it a bit hard to hear, but overall great pitch!
I really like the facts and statistics you brought forward in your argument against straws. facts like these greatly help the credibility in your argument and hit home especially to us Florida natives about trash on the beaches. An economic friendly and environmentally friendly compromise has great promise. Overall great job.
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